My writing goal is to edit my writing accurately. I can do this by checking my writing three times.
My reading goal is to use punctuation to enhance phrasing and prosody (end marks,commas, ect.).
On Monday 22/7/13 3/4K and 3/4 A went to Logan’s beach to watch the whales. We saw four Whales and one Seal, one of the Whales was waving at us. Sue took pictures of the Whales and she even took a few of us. Alex, Mel and Mike taught us some facts about Whales before we went.
So far I’m going really well on my goals because the books I’m reading have some really good words I can use them in my writing.
I like P.E because we play games and practice for the soccer team and basketball team.
P.E is awesome because we have the best teacher!
My goal is to write more than five paragraphs I can do this by writing more ideas in my plan.